Listen, I love the New York Times. I read it cover to cover (or pixel to pixel) every day and have it delivered in dead-tree format to my doorstep each morning.
But so often I come across an awkward sentence which I have to read and re-read several times to understand.
I’ve been noticing this for a long time now and it makes me wonder whether it’s a stylistic thing or a that they have had to lay off their best editors.
At any rate, I don’t have the same impression when I read he Wall Street Journal (which I admire but don’t love.)
Here’s a recent example:
“LAGOS, Nigeria — In a quarter-century, at the rate Nigeria is growing, 300 million people — a population about as big as that of the present-day United States — will live in a country roughly the size of Arizona, New Mexico and Nevada.” (from NYT)
What do you say, am I crazy?